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Lorelee Tate

Lorelee Tate

http://loreleetaite.blogspot.com
The Pizza Oven, AZ
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About Me

My interests (other than writing) include singing, acting, and drawing. I write primarily fantasy novels, though occasionally I slip in a poem or two.



HOW I REVIEW:

I don't read or review anything rated mature. Basically, most of what I review is fantasy. There are a few exceptions, however, but only if I really like the story. I usually start off with my honest opinion of the chapter (interesting, good, excellent, etc.), then offer a few suggestions for improvement. I will point out grammatical errors, since I believe that to be an important part of writing. Usually, I'll deal with these more in Notes and stick to content in the review itself. This is the type of review I like to get, so this is the type of review I give. The suggestions are nothing personal. (I usually only review something if I like it...) That's pretty much it. I read everything in my Library, but I don't always get to review everything there. It's more a time issue than anything else.

Another note: Please don't send me a message asking me to review your writing unless you've already reviewed mine. Just send me a read request.



*Yes, I took SON'S VENGEANCE down, the reason being that I entered it in ABNA 2009.


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Posted 9 Years Ago



The Genie in You

There's a genie deep within you;
He's been there from the start.
He's not in some old dusty lamp;
He lives within your heart.

He'll grant you all your wishes;
Make every dream come true;
For you alone command him--
He does what you say "Do!".

You tell him through your feelings;
Not just through words you say;
For what you truly feel within
Sends genie on his way.

So when your thoughts are fearful,
Instead of full of faith,
He still must do your bidding;
He knows no other way.

For he can only give you
What you believe is true.
No matter what the Truth may be--
Life gives your truth to you.

Now since you know this genie
Has always obeyed you,
You also know why all your dreams
Have never all come true.

But now you know the way to make
Your every dream come true;
You know what all the sages knew--
That genie, friend, is you!

(Charles David Heineke, 1996)
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Posted 10 Years Ago


Haha sorry for the typo in the last message. I didn't notice that. :) Of course we are still interested. hehe. Just give us a day or two and will get on it and review! Will let you know when ours is up too! Thank you!
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Posted 10 Years Ago


Thanks for the friends request! :) We love work!!

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Posted 11 Years Ago


Im really inspired by your writing you should create a group


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Posted 11 Years Ago


why thank you! It's been known to happen on occasion ;)

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Posted 11 Years Ago


thanx for adding me!have a great weekend.

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Posted 11 Years Ago


I am fine, heh. Would you like to read some of my stories tonight? My day has been a tad boring, so I have not done much, lol.

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Posted 11 Years Ago


Hello, friend! How are you on this fine day?

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Posted 11 Years Ago


hey, I am hoping to read more of your writing soon. I really enjoyed the beginning of your books and I want to know what happens next!

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Posted 11 Years Ago


I will have to post my poem about being a blue rose/uniquely beautiful is what it is...blue and roses are my favorites too!!!