Poisonpen

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About Me

reserved middle ager who loves a good story. writing became a challenge for me after reading a piece of fictional garbage that was actuallly published. it was a piece that was way too predictable and had charecters who were undeveloped. i said to myself, i can do that and do it better. subconsciously, i was doing it for deeper reasons, such as completing a task. being one of those people who tend to start something and not see it to completion described me to a T. that was ten years and three shorts stories ago. thing is now, i'm ready for some honest reviews. plus, i need to get a win under my belt to continue.


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Posted 15 Years Ago


Thanks for the review Poison. And I guess I censor the words cause I have a lot of younger readers on my friends list (15 and younger) and I wanted them to check the work too, and I don't want them to stop really reading a work cause the cusswords make it disgusting. I DO want them to get the point however. I've had problems with too many cusswords in a work before- so i guess I lower it a level for them by censoring it, but I'm sure they still get the point... eh... You're right through- I should keep em uncensored...

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Posted 15 Years Ago


Thank you for reading my short "A Relaxing Cup of Coffee". It is, in fact, part of two other shorts, I think you would enjoy them if you liked this last one. I had some trouble with those last lines, they didn't sound right. I need to work on them. Thanks!

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Posted 15 Years Ago


Thank you so much for the wonderful reviews! Send a poem my way and I'll be sure to do the same.

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Posted 15 Years Ago


thank you so much for the review....I tend to use too many words....thanks again

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Posted 15 Years Ago


Thanks for the nice review! I hope one to read something of yours.

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Posted 15 Years Ago


Thanks for the most complementry review! It's always nice to get good feedback. I would love to return the favour. Please feel free to read more of my stories and poems when you have the time.
All the best

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Posted 15 Years Ago


Thank you for the review! ..And yes, I do write poetry, thats my strong point actually. And I can't wait to read some of you work on here, soon I hope!

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Posted 15 Years Ago


Thanks for the reviews.

I see from your bio that you want some honest reviews, and I can't wait to give you some. I try not to be too brutally honest unless it's necessary, but I'm always looking for a good read.

Wobble wobble, and drop it like it's hot.

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Posted 15 Years Ago


Thanks for the review. The names I took from a couple of my friends. I'm not sure what movie you're speaking of though.

Thanks again.