Rruiyun : Writing

Hippos:Whales of the Land

Hippos:Whales of the Land

A Story by Rruiyun


please give me some comments to improve my writing skills thank you
A Weird Person I Met

A Weird Person I Met

A Story by Rruiyun


I met a weird person when I work in a convenience store. It was a very busy day. I and my fellow worker named Susan were making coffee for customers..