David Veele

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I'm twenty four
I bake all night listening to the plight of the moon. I was wounded crucified entombed and wrapped in linen you can call me Alpha I've been here since the begining
When sound wave started spinning reverberating creating matter I've been resurected the soul survivor of Atlantis
My ancestors fashioned planets out of play-dough and tossed them into orbit spinning them like draddles
i was craddled by the stars until i feel through space
on a remote ocean island i used my palms to create shade
I drank coconut milk and the earth became my mother
An imaculate conception unlike any other
I discovered i couldn't handle all the channels on tv so I began burning books and in their ashes I planted trees
Everyone contains the serpent and the flower
God is in the mirror and your words can bring you power

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Claysfire

Posted 16 Years Ago

love Love LOVE ; )

Claysfire

Posted 17 Years Ago

Thank you SO much for the beautifuol words on my page at ES ; )

You're the breath of sunshine I need today...as always!!!

me

Catala

Posted 17 Years Ago

thank you for the review...

I've heard of Secretary but my own Dom has told me i'm not allowed to look up information or see it until we can watch it together.... soooo... SHHHHH!

Claysfire

Posted 17 Years Ago

ok ok ok...'tis done mon...I know you had said it before and I actually had that in the descrip...but cahnged my mind and what do ya know...you remembered and I should know better ; )

and guess what...the sun is shinning and it is actually a bit warm...WARMTH
haha...yay

kk
hugs

The Lovely Sound Of Cra..

Posted 17 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for the criticism on the rhyme. It was good to get some feedback. I appreciate it.

Claysfire

Posted 17 Years Ago

I'm not sure...photobucket was down the other day and some of mine were little red xxx's

warmth sounds nice...wish I was there...blue sky today but no warmth.

kk
hope work isn't too ruff tonight...and we'll talk tomorrow

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Ruejacobs

Posted 17 Years Ago

thanx for your comment on my little feminazi poem, God Blinked...i tend to mix god and men up all the time...can't figure either of them out. lol

Claysfire

Posted 17 Years Ago

Holy crap...you were just here...and now you're gone.

Ok...well...I'm going to read blas...Sure be different to only some of it.

Thank hun for the kind words...glad both the man and woman inside you like it ; )

love and all the good stuff
kings
&
queens (for royalty sake)

Ruejacobs

Posted 17 Years Ago

thanx for your comment on my Arsonist. the father thing ended rather badly i'm afraid. i'd quite expected it, of course. no one disappears for thirty someodd years and then resurfaces without some very fundemental issues...and Daddy'O had some doozies. i wrote the poem the day before i actually heard his voice after tracking him down on the internet. i wrote it the day before my sister's birthday. she was the child he and my mother agree they wanted. i was the child that was the jinx. so it goes.

so about the poem...i was explaining to the other guy that commented how i write...i only think in images, not words, so when i start hearing these words in my head, i grab a pen and whatever paper is handy and make a mad dash to copy it word for word. i don't so much feel like i'm writing it so much as taking dictaion like some kinda secretary. and i don't go over the stuff to edit it, because i figure that i'll only ruin it. half the time i can't figure what i was on about in the first place until i've read it several times. i'm a product of our illustrious public school system so we're pretty much lucky i'm not monosyllabic at all... lol

Claysfire

Posted 17 Years Ago

This is one of the first writes I wrote where your style rubbed off on me...
sheesh...almost three years ya know...long time and still here...there and everywhere in-between ; )

On the bridge of a fairy tale, middle of nowhere, neither here nor there but smack dab in the center of happiness and despair, that is where you�ll find me.
Hand in hand with my broken heart and blurred vision, keeping you out of sight. I fight back the tears, swallow my pride, hold my chin up high and try to forget about remembering you.
As my eyes see nothing but those flickering fingers in candle light that haunt my mind and taunt my soul into submission. I long to begin again�take you in, fall away for awhile into your beautiful smile and breathe in your laughter.
but� I still await
white knight 'Mr right' and my happily ever after.

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