Jaded Perception

Jaded Perception

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About Me

We are all taken by novelty and think we have had it rough
My blades are dull suppressed by the hard edges its cut.
Busy spending my money on cheap things that break, like
people.
We need to focus on cleaning our love.
So chop into that symbolic onion and feel the burn.
Hurt.
Forcefully I cry, feel pain,
close my eyes.
Push so hard on them I begin to see the light
The juice of the onion loosens my rust.
and in time I began to shine
lost my dust and felt a new rebirth again.
now one by one I slice.
Leaving scars for those who so quickly can forget
And in that mirror I reflect out up down in and around that corner.
Down the street
Down that road I drive to home
That�s what I do
I drive sometimes,
dream
love
and ride sometimes
I offer a smile sometimes
my lips like two arms just reaching out to welcome them in
And with every opportunity
I carve with time
and keep an onion fresh to repent.



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Posted 7 Years Ago


Hi friend, I hope to see you back on the Cafe soon,
and posting your new inspirations ^_^
Kindest Regards, Michael

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Posted 11 Years Ago


So sad to hear that. I hope your memory is with you. Mine wasn't; so I lost about 50 pieces. Seredipity helped me get back some of my work but other than that I'm still in mourning..

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Posted 11 Years Ago


There's nothing on your page, JP :-( I hope you'd saved your work.

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Posted 11 Years Ago


if ur feeling froggy than u should awwwWays jump! so i finally got into my account but all the messages were deleted some how and not on top of that but i put some pics on here off my myspace because we cant use flashdrives or anythang like that out here, but i cant get them to show, and also i havent putu new writing on here yet but i get to that and then u havent been on the computer in HELLA long! miss talken to u but WATEVA! im a souljah and im OUT!

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Posted 11 Years Ago



I hope you're doing fine. What a special poem...and person.

C

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Posted 11 Years Ago


in order to experiance joy u neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed pain!!!! im guessing anyways

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Posted 11 Years Ago


hey, thanks for the comment. its funny that you suggested i write a story about her (princess), i actually wrote a movie about her. The first poem is a prelude to the movie/script (from her boyfriends point of view), and the second poem is at the end of the movie (from her point of view). anyways... i love your writing, keep it up, its much appreciated.

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Posted 11 Years Ago


Thanks for the add! :)

xxoxx

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Posted 11 Years Ago


Thanks for such a wonderful review of Hope to the End.

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Posted 11 Years Ago


cool contest!!!!