I'm Sorry

I wrote this for someone I can tell anything and everything to..

I'm sorry

For what i've done

Im sorry

For whats about to come

Im sorry

For the lies i've told

And the things

That hav'nt been resolved

But I promice

If you wait

And let me untie on my own

I will unwrap myself

To show you the truth behind it all

I wan't to tell you

But you and I both know

There's a risk behind it all

I wan't you to let me be

For you will be the one to see

The darkest side of me

Out of all my friends

Your the one

Who know's me best

And it kills me

To see

That your angry

At me.

Author's Note

Sorry that it's in red.. The stupid thing wouldnt let me change it after I picked it, Oh well lol...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime when we are sorry for deeds done. First step in healing and forgiveness. Hard to stop anger. I learn with many mistakes. Better to say nothing. Negative bring peace to no-one. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[JennaMarie]

I like the red! Very well done, the emotion is very apparent and pulls at the reader's heart. A quite universal message, as I think most people have been in a situation like this at some point or another, I know I have. :)

[J.]

First of all you spelled "promise" wrong. I need a bit more imagery in this one too. Give an example of the lie. "hav'nt" should be "haven't." I want to know more about this dark side.

[TJ]

nah the red makes it look cool.
good job capturing the emotions of a fight between friends here. and its made even more realistic because you ask for forgiveness but still ask for alone time to unwind.

[Maya Storm]

What did you do that was soo bad :P
I liked the flow.. a few spelling errors but did not take away from the meaning of the poem... all in all good write I had a good read :)

[CharlesMonroe]

So emotional, I love it, you can feel like everything you feel in it..
it's great (:

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such emotional write here,
I can feel this tug,
Nicely done

[Daytonight]

I think the red helps express the emotions behind the poem. Keep on penning!

[Kyla H]

Very strong, I like the flow of it. Nicely done.

[joshua deathdealer]

I like the red!! Good write Sam.