Dream Me A Kiss

Dream Me A Kiss

A Poem by {A}shley {B}lack @-;-
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A short poem Expressing a kiss in a Dream

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Dream Me A Kiss
 close your eyes feel me holding you
open your eyes see me in-front of you
close your eyes and feel my lips kiss you 
our perfect love warms my heart
hear me whisper I love you
open your eyes ...
I will be with you soon 

© 2011 {A}shley {B}lack @-;-


Author's Note

{A}shley {B}lack @-;-
Dreaming of a kiss in a long distance relationship please give honest reviews

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oh my gosh this is amazing. I love this poem :) Oh Im lost for words right now. Your words sound so soft and distant in my mind which gives me a feel of a dream like state. Your last line completely caught me off guard but I love it the most.

Posted 12 Years Ago


awww. this kinda reminds me of a poem that someone in the military would write to their wife

Posted 13 Years Ago


liked it

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 3 people found this review constructive.

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Sweet and romantic, waiting for a special someone while knowing they are waiting for you too makes it all worth it, I could feel the longing while reading your words
hopefully soon it all becomes real :))

Posted 13 Years Ago


Simply, short but sweet... long distance relationships are hard work but when you dream something like this, knowing when you see each other soon makes it worth that wait... and all that more meaningful... beautiful!

Posted 13 Years Ago


great...concise,and pithy.thanks for sharing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


the title alone is worth the read , great poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


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what a dreamy sentiment..

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like it

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Awwww I love it!
Very good!
It's cute :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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{A}shley {B}lack @-;-
{A}shley {B}lack @-;-

Sheriffhales, Shropshire , United Kingdom



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I Am Ashley Black (an alter ego ) I have a dark mind when it comes to my poetry as the strongest emotions come from negative RETURNING- I have been distant from this site for a while but I am fina.. more..

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