new fosters

Jade and Kevin Parker are now arriving to

my name is Jade Parker i am thirteen years old. me and my little nine-year-old brother Kevin have gone through many  foster parents but none of them have done well on us our birth dad died four years ago. so we've basically been everywhere in hope of fining a family. like most foster kids we have a small amount of belongings because when you're always going from one home to another you are gonna wanna take enough to not leave anything behind i take two suit cases and a cross bag Kevin takes a big bag with him. in my suit cases i have my diary my clothes and my blanket in my cross bag i take my old fashion camera and extra film. brother has his clothes, 5 board games,2 card games, and his guitar in his bag.  

so we were outside was with my luggage later i looked back at the apartment building in New York that was our last foster home now we were going to a new one "Jade, come on" Kevin called as he was getting in the car so i decided to get in it. it was October 25. the same day we were given up four years ago the last fosters i liked them they were nice people but unfortunately they barely knew Kevin was alive. Ever since the day we were put on foster care we made a promise that if one of us says no the other one says no too so that we are not separated. we are all have have left of family . so while we were in the car I was listening to not about angles by birdy. this time we were going to a small town called Ashwick valley. once we arrived to the house we were received by two people a man and a woman i guessed they were our new foster parents. "hello our names are Jordan and Jacquelyn. welcome to Ashwick, we are your new foster parents" said the woman "we know" i said "well let me give you a tour" said the man taking our luggage 

Author's Note

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