i know

i know

A Poem by Empty Spaces

rusting roses
twisted vines
but the lovly petels are left to hide
drowning in the ashes of the wicked
were are you?

i bless the fallen stars and still sing
but the condemded raven crows
his divious melody
it hurts my heart that its demonic

my, my, darling save your tears
raise your damnded wings
and decend from here
you are not what you claim to be
but your wrath is so hollow
it saddens me

id hear what you want to say
even if your mouth was stitched closed
your an open book , bearly clothed 
yet you sing about a wall?
honey...i found the wholes 

© 2013 Empty Spaces


Author's Note

Empty Spaces
read carefully. its complicatedly meaningfull

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Amazing. There were a few spelling errors, but nobody's perfect, right? I loved it, as always.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

even when you're typing your grammar is horrible. But, luckily for u, i love u anyway.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Empty Spaces

11 Years Ago

lol thank you
Sahara M.

11 Years Ago

Your welcome :)

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Empty Spaces

The Hole Across The Street, FL



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