The Summer Game

The Summer Game

A Poem by denisepauline
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for someone close to my heart. my summer was great...because of you.

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You remind me of everything

Everything reminds me of you

You remind me of me

You remind me of the summer dew

The heat, the flaring flame

The placid wind passing by

It’s a long lover’s game

Sing me this sweet lullaby

Laughing with the greenest grass

Just close your eyes with a sigh

Take my hand and make it last

Spread my arms and make me fly

Perfect moment in the dawn

Replaying my memories

I desperately hold on

This Summer I'll sorely miss

It ended in the rain’s spin

But your smile I remember

And the sun kissing my skin

It will start on forever


 

© 2010 denisepauline


Author's Note

denisepauline
this is for someone who's close to my heart. you will be forever in it. thanks for the summer memories. :)
see you next summer!
rhyming was kinda lame. i want to edit my ending. :)) comments?
not yet done. but i would love to read suggestions. :)

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nicely done. (: sincerity was all over the whole thing, i could tell you really cherish this person. till next summer with your special person! (:

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on June 10, 2010
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