did you forget;

did you forget

the nights we laughed

like there was no hate in the world

did you forget

the nights we yelled

and hated each other

did you forget

me

did you forget

those nights in your truck

staring at the stars

thinking infinity existed

did you forget

that night

when my hands were shaking

and I told you I loved you

and you said you loved me too

did you forget

me

did you forget

the nights I cried

and I said I was sorry

like you hurting me was my fault

did you forget

the nights you cried

and I still apologized

did you forget

me

did you forget

when I said goodbye

and we both cried

did you forget

how much you said you loved me

did you forget

that I always doubted it

did you forget

how you proved I was right

why did you forget

me

Reviews

[Emrick]

Opening and ending the stanzas with the same words added zest to your theme.
It's human nature to forget. People forget even the parents which brought them to earth.
Nice verse.

[Enigma]

I love the structure and the repetition of certain lines and words. And yes, when love turns sour, it's so difficult to move on and resist trying to explain away everything that happened. But even the worst of circumstances thankfully, do not last too long and we almost always make it out on the other side, wiser and stronger (and maybe a bit more paranoid) than before.

Beautifully penned. Keep writing!

[rach]

I loved this, I ask the same questions over and over!