Sinful Occasion

What are you trying to do?

I spent half a wallets worth on this cheap motel room,

We can just sleep or sin if you really want to.

Is it to much to ask, impromptu...you to take it off; tonight's for playing, first off shoes.

Relax, there's no needle or white pills to lay you,

Just thigh clenching words, phrases, the relax cue.

Its not that I'm in a hurry but seconds will turn to minutes,

so unplug that clock b/c time has its limits.

What are you nervous for, is it fear that compels you,

f**k that be spontaneous and let your desires manipulate you.

The shirts next, what? didn't you expect this,

the corners for the clothes and the sheets are for the reckless.

The imperfections? wouldnt mind a lot or just a pinch, regardless

this cheap motel room has a broken light switch.

So as you shed the rest, all your doubts gone up in flames,

this bed was made for sleeping, tonight we sin and lay.

So what is there left, explain to you the actions,

your waiting for what happens next, curious your reaction.

Should I explain her curves, detailed frame by frame?

The words that escaped her mouth, the spelling of my name?

Or the knocking of the walls, neighbors getting restless,

climax drawing near, but the ending I DETEST IT...

She f*****g fell asleep

Author's Note

Based off a song called Cheap Motel Room that I thought was awesome...and it's hilarious ending is what caught me.

Reviews

[Tasha]

I liked the ending. Great job.

[Lily Mae]

I love it and the way you turned it around at the end.. Excellent lol.xxx