Romanian nights

Romanian nights

A Poem by Adam Lain
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For the Full Circle Haiku Contest

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Moonlight, bleed many a ray
for the creeping thirst dwells inside me
prickling, my taste at life

© 2011 Adam Lain


Author's Note

Adam Lain
First Haiku. Strangely, I thought of vampires.

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an awesome Senryu :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Not a Haiku ...this is a senryu, and a d*&%n good one at that, well done. :)

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

short and upto the point...best of luck for that contest!^^

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Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was amazing Adam. You did a fantastic job.
♥ Ta'Shandra

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Perfect... an excellent write.. :) x

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Added on July 4, 2011
Last Updated on July 4, 2011
Tags: haiku, vampire
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Adam Lain
Adam Lain

Flint, MI



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