I have no heart

I have no heart

A Poem by A.D Edwards
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Thoughts about love from a man's point of view (me)

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I see you
The simplest form of acceptance
Wondering why our hearts have a resemblance
I could not help but to surrender
I had a heart, yes I remember

Every day it boggles my mind
Why did I get myself in this bind?
Why cannot science prove how I survive
With no heart but only you in my eyes

Now it all makes sense to me
Why my home is where my heart used to be
Why I think about you day and night
The sound of your voice even when we fight

You have showed me what a soulmate should be
And I love you for all that we are and yet to be
We have braved many storms, but one thing remains true
I have no heart, it belongs with you

© 2014 A.D Edwards


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Loved it. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


A.D Edwards

8 Years Ago

Thank u :)
very very beautiful written "Every day it boggles my mind
Why did I get myself in this bind?
Why cannot science prove how I survive
With no heart but only you in my eyes " these lines are beautifully written.....

Posted 9 Years Ago


A.D Edwards

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)
This is so perfect. .......I have no heart, it belongs to you.........it couldn't be more true.

Posted 9 Years Ago


once we meet that soulmate...our hear is forever given to another, we no longer own it.

very expressive piece of writing...

Posted 9 Years Ago


A.D Edwards

9 Years Ago

Thank you, I wrote this truly from the heart
I am not quite into all these stuff ya know. But i must say it would be divine. The way you have wrote this piece pouring all your emotions here. It was really an honest write. Simply writing your heart out. I wish you both.good luck in the future :) god bless yaa. Takecare

~Sophy

Posted 9 Years Ago


A.D Edwards

9 Years Ago

Thank u Sophy! I appreciate your honesty :)
mesmerizing, well crafted...:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


A.D Edwards

9 Years Ago

Thank u friend!
Sanjh

9 Years Ago

welcome brother...:)
I'm really sure i left a review on this piece, this is a very serene piece! very raw, not afraid to bare your soul. i really like it. Your writing style is very similar to mine and I'm convinced i added that to my review.haha

Posted 9 Years Ago


A.D Edwards

9 Years Ago

You're right they are very similar no wonder I love your pieces so much haha and thank you I appreci.. read more

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Added on November 3, 2014
Last Updated on November 3, 2014
Tags: love, relationship, soulmate, acceptance

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A.D Edwards
A.D Edwards

Jamaica



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I am a male of Jamaican nationality.I am an expressive soul. I am drawn to things that have a deep meaning and people who appreciate that. I enjoy reading the works of others. I have been passionate a.. more..

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