A Friend Or A Fiend?

Praising a friend's poem then slying marking it down is a constipated game...

Is she a friend or a fiend?

With lips puckered in a kiss for you 

And a blade nestling in her cloak 

That craves your jugular, needs your blood 

She’s venom she’s Brutus

Killing your poems on the sly

With a stinking leprous soul and 

With a hating heart  

With a dirty corrupt finger

Devil’s spawn is she, no one’s friend 

Least of all yours 

So beware beware beware 

Of this ugly jealous cretin that can't write 

I have already told you 

Author's Note

Be careful of this blood sucker everyone. Ban her from your page ;)

Reviews

[Drake]

So you're pestonjee_
I've received absurd message about you. Please man cause of you a getting filth in return of my review, stop please.

[AJNJ]

Not because of me bro. She’s just a an unattractive and pathological personality. I’ve flushed and forgotten her long ago. Sorry you got caught in the crossfire. She’s just acting like an ugly woman scorned 😹 and you know how deadly they can get. My assurance...she’s flushed and forgotten.

[AJNJ]

I’m glad though that she’s exposed herself. She’s utter filth. My job is done. Thank you Pestonjee 😆

[Drake]

I had and have zero idea about this, thanks that you cleared it out. Peace

[LazerRays]

Poetry isn’t about praise. A true person wouldn’t ban someone for something as petty as a bad review. Don’t fret the small stuff, right? Ya don’t gotta shoot others down if they don’t like your poetry. Forgive. Forget. Life’s too short, ain’t no one gonna remember the time they got a bad review later on. At least I don’t. Don’t haunt my nightmares

[AJNJ]

I love bad reviews 😅 I won’t haunt you Sarah. I promise.

[LazerRays]

Oh no I wasn’t talking about you. I mean bad reviews don’t haunt my nightmares haha

[AJNJ]

Boy I’m relieved 🤣

[Ralph Proenza (Docralph..]

Dark poem! And the Tat speaks volumes of TREACHERY! Good work, Pestonjee.

[AJNJ]

Thank you for liking it

[John the Baptist]

A constipated game? Let me come to terms with that image. It appears someone feels betrayed because someone else first praised a poem and then criticized it. The pictured tattoo sends a message all by itself. The language is really harsh. Is it possible this is being taken too seriously?

[AJNJ]

It’s about all the fake politically correct f**ktards here 🤪 it’s fun to watch them in action haha

[Pestonjee_]

Stop it man! Let em' go... They are not at all bothered by this. Write literally nice poems and show other what's poetry. Anyway enjoyed this though LOL... XD

[AJNJ]

She's stalking me. Someone call an ambulance hahaha. Seriously Robert. I'm just having fun. Nothig serious man.

[Pestonjee_]

Of course she'd stalk you if you make her bff s angry. Well Sarah is another b***h, she's tricking you.

[AJNJ]

I just go by the poetry. If it's lame and irritating I point it out. No interest in other politics here.

[Pestonjee_]

really... I see something else. You're trolling them simply...and she'd be mad as a wet hen LOL

[AJNJ]

Sometimes one has to be cruel to be kind. To those who are misguided and deluded about their writing. It's a favor actually. Nothing personal.

[Pestonjee_]

And this poem... ??? Come on she's a vampire, you're in love with her darkside. Gosh!!! Haha.
Can you PM me?

[AJNJ]

This poem is a comment on all such sly farts 😅💨 Not just one.

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Beware you could be accused of the same of killing poems on the sly with a jealous hating heart.
At first few lines I thought this was about a femme fatale but then probably not. Very strong dark poetics. Keep writing.

[AJNJ]

This is not a poetic masterpiece. But I hope its to the point and delivers the message. Thank you.

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

This is about some one who brutally criticises others poems too sharply. That's the message I get from this. I'm the kindest reviewer of poems so I don't approve of judging and ripping others poems apart unless very gently.

[AJNJ]

At least I’m not touristy 🤪 I’m thankful everyday. See you around Zainab. Byeeeeeeeee

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Is there anything wrong with being touristy? In what sense please?

[AJNJ]

Lol he’ll nooo 😅 Maa’m it’s absolutely wonderful to be touristy. Now leave me alone. You have been told where you stand with your writing presently. My jobs done. Please enjoy yourself 😉