Light

Light

A Poem by Pestonjee_
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She

colludes with raindrops

to weave rainbows in the sky

Her silver bathes the moon

As honey she coats

a mellow earthly morn

 

Her blush is a lilac-rose

Her footsteps are gold

She dons an amber crown

She is a wave that knows no sea

But she swims in the iris

of the bluest blue eyes

 

She’s the brilliance of frost

She kindles the sun

And a zillion solitaires

Yet her love beats in

the hearts of glow-worms

for little or no cost

 

She’s the reason candles burn

and imps frolic in Jack-O-Lanterns

Come dusk, she holds Erebus

in a trance, as she bids

joyless shadows to dance

© 2020 Pestonjee_


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Pestonjee_
Thanks :)

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Oh My!! is that the same person who wrote "GATES TO INSANITY"?! I'm speechlessly stunned! this is a "well written" masterpiece, more than just a beautiful poem, heavenly, mystical, mysteriously alluring... and I'm not saying that because I'm Light and Your poem's title is "Light", but because You owned it! some of the expressions are not just breathtakingly beautiful, they hold a high degree in the sense of what they mean. I specially loved and speaking of this,

"She is a wave that knows no sea
But she swims in the iris
of the bluest blue eyes."

I applaud You so very high and loud my friend!!


Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pestonjee_

3 Weeks Ago

I told you I’ll try to write something that you may like. Great to see you appreciate this poem so.. read more
Light🌟

3 Weeks Ago

and YOU did! that was really delightful to read, the real thanks go to You my sweet and kind friend .. read more
Pestonjee_

3 Weeks Ago

You are welcome always 🤗 Keep inspiring everyone Light.



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One superlative: "fantastic".

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


This is lovely Pestenjee!
Light reaches even the darkest of places good sir:)
This is not the crude hand of all the brash remarks that were stirred about in all those fake reviews everyone was getting! of this I am now quite sure! nice to meet you (that lovely lightsong as I call her does tend to get into your heart doesn't she:)

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pestonjee_

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you for reviewing so kindly, dear sir. Some people encourage and reinforce goodness. We can’.. read more
Am never flattering, and being honest I will say I could read it after every read!
Yes light knows no bounds. Truly couldn't pick a favourite verse, I find each containing equal celestial touch. Imgine even the powerful sun is null without light and all object would loose their value if light doesn't reach to them. I used to hate this chapter in physics for its mechanics but it's something to fallen in love with! You should've written this a bit earlier to let people know how poignant your write ups could be. No one can deny the second stanza of this piece. Cause poets like you write uniquely something new, poetry is alive!


Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pestonjee_

3 Weeks Ago

That’s a dream review for me 🤗 Thanks Tahsin. I love every bit of the encouragement you’re se.. read more
Tahsin.Z🍁

3 Weeks Ago

Honoured I am!😀 This weekend actually passed amazing, hope yours did too =) You are welcome🍀�.. read more
Mr. Pestonjee this cat is now firmly convinced that a guy around here has split personality 😹 I wish someone gifted me this poem. It’s right up me alley.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pestonjee_

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you for looking in Kat. I’ll try to gift you a poem soon 🤗
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Gee
Shows off your undoubted talent Mr P.
Read your Insanity post too but better understood this piece.
Good morning sir.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pestonjee_

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you for looking in Mr. Gee. 🤗 Trying sincerely.
Beautiful imagery in this one. Indeed, let there be light!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pestonjee_

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you very much sir.
A wonderful piece of writing
Hopefully you'll be left alone now to carry on with this sort of excellence

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pestonjee_

3 Weeks Ago

Thank so very much my friend. I gave it some thought a few days back and decided to just go in pursu.. read more
Dave Brown

3 Weeks Ago

good luck............great poetry
Pestonjee_

3 Weeks Ago

🤗.........!
Thank you
A wonderful piece of writing, monsieur Pestonjee! A troll, huh? Difficult to understand from this poetic offering! Full of lovely imagery and description, this one. Particularly enjoyed the reference to Erebus and how his reign as a deity of shadow is affected by light itself. So many original images here, so you should be happy with this one! Fine writing! :))

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pestonjee_

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you Jamila! Indeed, every human is multi-shaded. Yet the world is quick to judge *nudge nudge*.. read more
Oh My!! is that the same person who wrote "GATES TO INSANITY"?! I'm speechlessly stunned! this is a "well written" masterpiece, more than just a beautiful poem, heavenly, mystical, mysteriously alluring... and I'm not saying that because I'm Light and Your poem's title is "Light", but because You owned it! some of the expressions are not just breathtakingly beautiful, they hold a high degree in the sense of what they mean. I specially loved and speaking of this,

"She is a wave that knows no sea
But she swims in the iris
of the bluest blue eyes."

I applaud You so very high and loud my friend!!


Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pestonjee_

3 Weeks Ago

I told you I’ll try to write something that you may like. Great to see you appreciate this poem so.. read more
Light🌟

3 Weeks Ago

and YOU did! that was really delightful to read, the real thanks go to You my sweet and kind friend .. read more
Pestonjee_

3 Weeks Ago

You are welcome always 🤗 Keep inspiring everyone Light.

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