Engagement

Shaving your sins off the planet, I SEE!

Hand and hand, Smiling so grand with glee

Running in the sunsets with no paid fee

Both of you spread your wings far and free

I am so happy for thee

 

Twisting and turning within my bed sheets

Sensing the worlds of fallen defeat!

Rolling down the memory lane

Breaking the love chain

 

I recall our engagement from adolescent years ago

 Yet youthful in style wearing a silken golden bow

Planting a kiss upon your lips with a sensual show

May I ask?

Ti's’ is your last task....

Has those images of us stayed within you, though?

               

The suspense emerges...

 

Same race as I

Big blue colored eye

Similar hair colored dye

Evidently to be so shy

 Yet I ask myself why...

Why didn't you stay by my side?

Leaving me to undoubtedly cry

With tragic sigh

Of the memories of you and i..

 

On one knee

You spoke languages of how much you loved me...

 

 

 The train stops

 The plane flies

The taxi drives

 The boat swims

Everything seems to be normal and old

 

Your soul is now twisted cold

Or for I was told

Was it because of your acknowledgement of the betrayal; make you sad? 

or was it for the horrid childhood you had? 

Viewing your mother, jumping upon pads with other men 

you say you wish to be a man well then ,my love, when? 

Reviews

[A. Amos]

I like your writing, as I find your style daring and very stylish. Honest and through the point with many hidden messages and in every message you explain life. Good job my friend will come back to read more

[Chris]

You established your rhyme scheme well - from the start but the overall rhythm stumbled as I read the work aloud.

[Ai Lun]

I love the pauses created by the ellipsis! Well penned! :)