The Storm

The Storm

A Poem by A. Hannah
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First one in a while. Anything constructive is appreciated

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Like a whirlwind, entranced.
Imbued with a twist, a taught smile.
Magnificently reigning and raining down.
The death of which brings a calm, sigh.

However you look through,
The looking glass is thoroughly transparently translucent.
Interpretations diluted by the opalescent
behavior to which we speak.
By what, we write.
Which is right to us.

The treacherous tornado, destructive,
A deluge of passion
Tempest of trepidation
A sexual striation of thrust and force.
Chaos it brings but calming, it seems.
Leaves leaves, left by the wayside,
Left by the storm.

© 2017 A. Hannah


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A. Hannah
First one in a while. What do you think?

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I don't know that ms barrie is right regarding the 'leaves leaves left...' word choice because it fits in with the style of the previous stanzas e.g. 'reigning...raining' and 'write...right...'
a form of alliteration.

Aside from that I did like the whipping up of the phrases - indicating chaos and the settling down - post storm with sexual overtones.
Does this point to sexual frustration sated I wondered.

Great piece of writing.
:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A. Hannah

4 Years Ago

I can totally see what you mean, initially that wasn't what I was thinking when I wrote this. It was.. read more



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I don't know that ms barrie is right regarding the 'leaves leaves left...' word choice because it fits in with the style of the previous stanzas e.g. 'reigning...raining' and 'write...right...'
a form of alliteration.

Aside from that I did like the whipping up of the phrases - indicating chaos and the settling down - post storm with sexual overtones.
Does this point to sexual frustration sated I wondered.

Great piece of writing.
:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A. Hannah

4 Years Ago

I can totally see what you mean, initially that wasn't what I was thinking when I wrote this. It was.. read more
Definitely consumed by the power in the write, like a gale of emotion, lifting one to the pinnacle and sending the reader towards a steep drop. I really like your choice and play with words, kudos! Looking forward to reading more. - Kee

Posted 4 Years Ago


A. Hannah

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much Keegan! I'm very excited that you enjoyed this piece!
this is an amazing write, I enjoyed the captivating, chaotic, unique imagery your pen weaved throughout this write. not to mention intensity, energetic flow... while reading this
yet, it's quite relatable...

I did notice a minor issue tho:
"leaves, leaves left by the wayside" --
The second use of the word "leaves" --

I'm not sure if I read that wrong, but either way, I think this is brilliant.

I look forward to 're visiting your ink...
(favs. 100/100) & Thank you kindly, for subscribing to my gibberish) :)

- x - barrie

Posted 4 Years Ago


ms. barrie

4 Years Ago

I see your point: A. Hannah just so you know, the last stanza is my favorite...second comma after.. read more
A. Hannah

4 Years Ago

I see what you meant and added the comma, allows for pause. Phew! Thank you so much! To take away th.. read more
ms. barrie

4 Years Ago

you're welcome :)

so do i... i will be back very soon to read more.


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Added on January 3, 2017
Last Updated on January 5, 2017
Tags: Storm, chaos, communications, love, tempest, opalescent

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