Looking Within

Looking Within

A Poem by Aramey

Looking up into the night's canvas,
all is silent, but a melody moves inside
taking a breath into the cool air,
as wonder drifts into my soul.
I can feel my spirit expand,
running wild through the meadow,
amid the wide open spaces of nature,
the breeze, like silk brushing across my flesh
this is what heaven feels like
as I lay into the grass,
my eyes quietly drift to the shapes
the heavens made...
As I softly close my eyes,
I can still feel it in the air,
inching around me in waves.
Even as the sky is dark,
besides the light of painted stars,
I feel the sunshine growing inside of me,
and I sense a new reality...
I am a part of everything, for eternity,
and everything in it's vastness,
lies inside of me.



© 2013 Aramey


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There's nothing more I can say, than Beautiful, Aramey. Love it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aramey

7 Years Ago

Thank you, dear friend. I'm glad you enjoyed it and your encouraging words about my depressed muse h.. read more
¥ay $wagger

7 Years Ago

You are very welcome, Aramey...I enjoy reading you, I'm a huge fan. I Loved it. :)
i like the extensive vocabulary you use instead of reusing the same things over again like alot of ppl do you have a plethora of words very nice

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aramey

7 Years Ago

Yes, I agree. Repeated descriptive words can be redundant. Thank you for the compliment and thank yo.. read more
darkabyss

7 Years Ago

no problem beautiful
A profound & eloquent write. Loved the inspirational message within this fine your poem. Great work Aramey. A meaningful read. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aramey

7 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm glad you discovered the message and also that you enjoyed. Thank you for taking the t.. read more

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