"Walls & Mirrors"

"Walls & Mirrors"

A Poem by Luna

 

 

Tell me what you see
oh looking glass man,
do you see beauty?                                   

Do you see soft lips
and ample hips, or
smooth skin to wrap
your hands in?

Do you see eyes like
the moor, dark and
even a shade alluring?
 
Tell me what you see
oh looking glass man,
do you see poetry?

Words that which my lips
produce, like a solid breath,
or a lettered touch, flowing
like silk into your ears?
 
 
Tell me what you see
oh looking glass man,
do you see a strand of hope?
 
A small stitch of a place you
could call your own,
a place for you within me?
 
Oh looking glass man,
I'll tell you what I see.
 
I see a time that came and went,
of endless sunny "hopefuls" and
nights with feathered dreams, of
drapes of emotions washing the
halls and walls of the space I
haunted.
 
I see an old smile creeping at the
corner of my lips, weary and weak
from lack of use.
 
And it tells you, quite simply to...
 
close-your-eyes,
 
for-all-it's-worth.

© 2008 Luna


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wow amazing poem
very very excellent !

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, you are an amazing writer! I love it. You are wonderful with words but I think you should stop looking without to find the beauty within. I think you are amazing. I love you.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 27, 2008

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Luna
Luna

The 12th Circle, FL



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