Two Empty Glasses

[Currently Under Construction] I am working on a few poems/ speeches to say at my besties wedding :)

You might think that as the glasses are empty,

That this poem is for sorrow,

This poem is that of friendship and hope,

Of love and trials,

For these cups are empty,

So that your love can fill them,

As on this day you are joining together,

To live a beautiful life as a family,

And from this day your cups will fill,

With many shared experiences,

 As the river time flows on.

 

I wish that your glasses may bubble over with pure happiness.

Author's Note

Having a very hard time with the ending of this one any suggestions?

Reviews

[robing123456]

You might think that as the glasses are empty,

That this poem is for sorrow,

Thats exactly what i thought!

[AWickedMoon]

Ha-ha! Well I fooled you! HOw did you like the poem? :)

[robing123456]

it was very nice. i gave it 100 units of enjoyment

[sithlordjp]

Glasses are so fragile and need to be handled with care.... might provide a way in for the ending?

[Rob Santana]

I meant your cups will fill

[Rob Santana]

(Tear drops from my eye, and that doesn't happen often, hahaha) what about "your cups will with many shared experiences as time flows on "

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you for your wonderful comment. I'm glad it invoked emotions. I used your idea but slightly tweaked it how does it look? :)

[Rob Santana]

Perfect. (Huge smile)

[Gaston Sanders]

Anger and happiness
Tears and smiles
Hurts and ecstasies
Death and living
Put them all into this wonderful tale of their lives