Describing

Describing

A Poem by Phantom Heart

 

She smiles like sunshine
Beautiful
Glowing
Rapture
 
A voice like water
Glorious
Transcending
Calm
 
Her eyes brush against my soul like velvet
Addictive
Dancing
Souls
 
With laughter like a thousand musical bells
Musical
Happiness
Raining

© 2009 Phantom Heart


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Phantom Heart
Just trying something different.

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describing Pancake!!! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


What delicate structuring.
I adore the flow of words and the consequent descriptions.
Simply fantastic.

Keep writing,
Punishment

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like this, i think it's really beuatiful.
Such a wonderful write.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on May 23, 2009

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Phantom Heart
Phantom Heart

Coal City, IL



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