Somewhere

Alliteration

Sweet sincere smile shrouding sinister spirit somewhere….

Somewhere, Smeary smudge spoiling sinless soul

Skilful spiritual sermon smothered somewhere……

Somewhere, soulless sage spilling shouting screams

 

Author's Note

tried alliteration for the first time, hope you like it and do tell me how can i improve :)

Reviews

[Ishita Dixit]

Ah-mazing write this!
Its a tough task to coin meaningful sentences uing alliteration, but you did it perfectly well!
Congrats! :)

[Abilash Uttama]

thank you so much!

[Death's Poet]

I really like this. For your first attempt at alliteration I think you mastered it! I love how it was so deep and yet had an almost whimsical tounge twistery feel at the same time. Such an interesting read. I loved it

[Abilash Uttama]

thank you very much for the review, it's nice to see you again :)