Poems To Mars Characters

Poems To Mars Characters

                      Martian Burned

Their commander told them, "we are going to send you to a far away place then bring you back and ask you some questions" they were burned alive next to red tomatoes to remind them where the color of their martian place is.

Now they are saying that they are little psyops voice technology spirits that stalk north americans that are born at hospitals because they want to insert when the doctor slaps the buttocks and pig back ride those spirits to live on earth and that the corrupts owed them because they shot their flying saucer and that the red wallet is when people worry and are also the tomatoes of a photographer and that when hospital moved they got stuck near by and that they need to carve spirits with fear and worries because they feed from that and that is how they figure how to stay alive and that when people die they wait and take those spirits to be recycled and that that is how extra terrestials are reproduced and that was the reason they impersonated the cia because they are friends with them and that is the reason caucasian look like goat faces that resemble aliens because they went through their buttocks when they were born, and that f**k everybody that they will not respect the Raven membership.

And that the caucasians that wrote the constitution wore white wigs.

Well they still not allowed to use the complete word unb on earth if that is what they are, glad getting new camera. I still think that they are a bunch of f**s, photos available at google search engines. No wonder they dont have penises because they are f**s. Poems To Mars.

And to listen to this song or else

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CdXesX6mYUE

ps

Put all the gay extra terrestials in a ship and send them to red hell.

Author's Note

Poems To Mars Characters

Reviews

[Shane Mohamed]

Wow, you are a Catholic, with passion! It is a little confusing, but I sort of get it when it's all done with. Obviously, you've got something against the government, and you always think they're plotting for something, which they probably are, and probably always will; and you think that Caucasians are too controlling, and you obviously abhor homosexuals, of all sorts. I've never seen a girl as blunt as you are Anika, and I like that. Stay as you are, and never change. You can be a little weird sometimes, but that's okay; I like you the way you are. God bless.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

The poem is about a gay extra terrestrial that was shot and was found laying down with his buttocks facing up by military aircraft.

Soliloquy style the act of speaking alone or to oneself with esp as a theatrical device
ESP the supposed ability to perceive events and information by means other than the physical senses

The poem explains in response the soliloquy esp similar to a monologue of a gay extra terrestrial being made fun of and is also a metaphor because the ET is saying that who ever shot them down should go back in time as they wore wigs similar to sheep when they tried to mimic England even though they wanted to get away from them and that all gay demons have tails that can be stepped on.

The poem is also a metaphor because when those male founding fathers wore wigs to sign the constitution it allowed we the people to make fun of anything including them which goes into explaining further that no one including the founding fathers are excempt from freedom of speech

The extra terrestrial is saying that before caucasians with goat faces from England were born that extra terrestrials went inside of them through the buttocks and that is the reason extra terrestrials resemble goats and goats have been resembled with the devil and that extra terrestrials the same as the devil are from a red planet and that is the reason the founding fathers moved to America because they wanted to get away from the gay evils from England that wore wigs.

And I do not have anything against One Nation Under God Government I Am Just A Simple Humble White Arch Angel Protected By The USConstitution To Push To Hell All Ghosts And Demons

Thank You Founding Fathers For Writing The US Constitution

That allows me to prove that I am protected to say and write anything about decomposed bodies that no longer exist including demons ghosts that no matter how many persons remember them they will never manifest in physical form

I really think that lost ghosts are very stupid because they didnt find their way to Heaven

And that all demons are very stupid because they were kicked out and sent down to Hell

[SquinklaPsyOps]

And a message to all the lesbians all lesbians are demons and all gay demons and all the extra terrestrials are gays from hell and they should make contact with the extra terrestrials from red mars to take them to hell and out of this planet

[Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAutho..]

An excellent Andy-Warhol-like mind painting ... soup can brain purge; but you left the label on so no discount for you. Otherwise, a gay piece that exudes a most cheerful anger in a colorful sort of way. I'm thinking your chest was much relieved of the forces of inertialess gravity mass matters... mad as a tattered hatter.

[Ahmad Cox]

It was a witty randomness I appreciated.

[FlatLineBeauty]

This is def very different and I've never read anything like this. Its unique and I enjoyed it. There were times I had to stop and try and think as to what you were getting to, but I like it when an author picks at my brain.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

This sounds very nice, "I like it when an author picks at my brain.", your comment sounds very original , you always impress me with everything you write. I like your original writing style, have you ever thought about getting a job with the intelligence agencies, heres the list when youre ready to apply http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/SquinklaPsyOps/1233964/ theyre looking for writers.

[FlatLineBeauty]

Oh neat. What kind of pieces do they look for?

[SquinklaPsyOps]

How Much You Mean to Me
A Poem by WinterRose71

[supernegm]

I think it is unique and strange, which is good in my opinion. But aren't the sentences pretty long with excessive use of "that" to connect them? Maybe I'm wrong but I thought I should let you know. Otherwise, I liked it fast pace and uniqueness... I only suggest separating the sentences and adding some full stops to make it easier to read. Or maybe it is part of the poem writing style? I'm not sure I didn't write poem before so, do the right thing!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Yes you are right, I wrote it at the speed of thought, and at the same time was doing several things at the same time.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

When I wrote it the train only whistled once and not several times, so I only had that chance and had to do it very fast.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Then the following day was waiting for the train whistle to complete it and until that signal wrote the piece that was missing. I got very lucky because I didnt loose my train of thought.

[supernegm]

I see :) that explains a lot. Still, you can rewrite it to the better. It has potential.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

I like moving forward, I will try to get a team of writers, OK?

[KeeD]

Interesting, a very unique and weird presentation which added to the confusion of the whole piece. I'm trying to figure out if it's in relation to the show and the 09er's or if its on a whole different tangent :) But it made for a super cool read. I'm waiting for more so I can make better light of the subject

[SquinklaPsyOps]

The other part of it is in my phone, really hoping somebody will steal it because is written at the speed of thought and I cant find the software to transfer it to my computer or maybe I will have to hire somebody to retype it that is boring, that is why Im hoping somebody would steal it so dont have to type it again thats boring.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

If I could find a slave to steal it from my phone so dont have to retype it, that would be like winning the lottery.

[KeeD]

"steals your phone" OH Nice pictures, wait sorry back to work, types it out for you, muahahah she'll never know i'm stealing this stuff!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

The way to do it is to wait for the train to whistle and at that moment all the people that hear it open their minds so then you just choose what you are looking for and then type it on phone and that proves intellectual ownership

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Is something like looking for things that most people ignore and that is the space that gives room to go in there shopping.

[Riding the Rainbow]

nice work:) well done;))))))))

[Khaled A Khunaifer]

Nice poem, I'm not good at sci-fi .. but it felt too quick, maybe you should consider slowing down and getting more into details

[SquinklaPsyOps]

I wrote it super fast at the speed of thought, I was happy to see an idiot that I had beaten down that he was mad as soon as he looked me, I was happy to see that every time he looks at me he ignites in anger and that was the purpose intended.

[Khaled A Khunaifer]

If you continue practicing story-based poetry with long slow-rhyme verses is a not an easy thing, especially if you go into details ..

[MoriartyMesa]

On a Lit sense, you are all over the place. There was a bit of a run on sentence, on a culture level, you spoke in words that would crack a mountain.





Oh the music fits as a nice background the words

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Yeah, wrote it at the speed of thought, that is what happened.