Enchanted

En Cantar

White unicorns cross and jump non-stop 

Towards the narrower side of the street

If you look at the sign you will see

A fairy princess working in a blue dress

It seems that she only rises

When the elves cross

Towards the castle at the end of the street

Right there where the heat is

Imagine mermaids on the moon

With Sparks painting the stars

And dancing princesses with scented dresses flying

In a blue coach

The dragon of the castle is sad and in a very bad mood

Is his crazed fire which feels warm

And the witch neighbor might seek a remedy

Because the fire does not cool down

Could spend her life with that giant

That everybody fears

And if I go touch her magic wand

She says she is only human.

Author's Note

Tribute

Thank you Maria, Rene, Kika, Andre, Daniela and Sergio for saving my life

Reviews

[Archia]

This has such a wonderful feel of fantasy. You brought forward so many different images, so many different aspects of a fantasy world. Great to read.

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlande..]

I found a celtic coin yesterday

there is a reason for everything, no matter how unpleasant it can seem

thank you for sending me this; I cannot say I understand as well as I should, but, once again
thank you

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

O! this is wonderful. in its prose format. The language convey the thought. Well done.

[emilyfulken]

a beautifully written poem. I liked it!! very descriptive. very pretty. flows well together. no errors. very enjoyable to read. again overall, very beautiful poem.

[Revolutionary]

only human but remarkably incredible.love it.great fantasy write

[SyberRose]

Lovely whimsical piece...nicely penned...Rose

[Derek Smith]

its alright, I like it, the words are nice, just seems incomplete.. like one of the other comments said sounds like it could be the start to something else, but as a complete poem itself im not so sure, but it is nice, thanks for sharing it with me

[Justaguy]

This feels like it could easily be the beginning of a fantasy story. Nice!

[ms. barrie]

Wow, what a gorgeous, mystical yet very profound poem.
Absolutely love the imagery you depicted in this write,
Especially the third stanza. This is an amazing write!
Thanks for sharing.:) - 100 - 100

[Angel]

Mysterious, magical...a mythical feel.