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Sonnet VI – Demonic werewolves

Sonnet VI – Demonic werewolves

A Poem by Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-
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Respect and feel women!

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A pack of wolves with mutilated masks

Instinct of hunger inflames their senses

They creep and spy on bare victims to bask

Each to hunt each, the blood hunt commences

 

They jump to shadows and in mist transform

As preys wander naïve in their pink dreams

Then out they slip in perfect human form

And charm their dupes with intrigues of bright gleam

 

The gleam forms oceans of obscurity

With time she slips into the direful trance

He clasps her heart, virtue and chastity

Through the eloquence of cryptic romance

 

It leaves her hollowed or awful marred

And regroup with his demons pack, so proud!

© 2013 Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-


Author's Note

Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-
Where I come from, we are a conservative society, based and run by religion. And our religion "Islam" Prohibit any relationship between men and women before marriage - Personally I like that. So this poem is about those guys who trick women , maybe also outside of my society, to simply use them to sate their bloody and lusty desires then throw them away after they are done.

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The Title drew me in, although i'll read any of your work because honestly i'm a fan.
Your ability to tell a story through poetry and with such amazing imagery.. wow sir not to mention this piece can be perceived in a different light as well, with the metaphors so creatively thought about.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

7 Years Ago

thank you so very much
I shall hold your testimony dearly



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You captured the concept of hunger, thirst and desire so accurately here, how refreshing to stumble upon a piece that is completely metaphorical! I love this. Other cultures fascinate me!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Willow!
I am so pleased and humbled by your words!
I agree with Keegan D'souza - couldn't have said it any better! Brilliant!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

7 Years Ago

thank you again
Tarry Franck

7 Years Ago

my pleasure again
The Title drew me in, although i'll read any of your work because honestly i'm a fan.
Your ability to tell a story through poetry and with such amazing imagery.. wow sir not to mention this piece can be perceived in a different light as well, with the metaphors so creatively thought about.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

7 Years Ago

thank you so very much
I shall hold your testimony dearly
A strong metaphoric poem about the animals among the human. Very well written.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

7 Years Ago

thank you my friend
If I were a wolf, I'd be offended by the comparison! ;)

You state your beliefs with conviction and certainty. Abuse and deception of others for personal enjoyment is wrong. Well stated!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

7 Years Ago

LOL! indeed
thank you, LA
I agree with your note and highly respect it.

You've handled that theme perfectly, and the metaphors you used were powerful and full of imagination.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Dalia
Glad you liked it

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Tags: wolf, lust, hunger, senses, hunt, mist, pink, intrigues, trance, romance, gothic, poor, heart broken

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Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-
Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

Amman, Middle East, Jordan



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"A poet from the dark realm, from the world of Gothic hymns" Please visit my website http://adamnlebzo.wix.com/ronnin-warrior Name: Adam lebzo Age: 21 Hobbies: 1 Ninjutsu, Kung fu shaolin, Ji.. more..

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