Sonnet VI – Demonic werewolves

Respect and feel women!

A pack of wolves with mutilated masks

Instinct of hunger inflames their senses

They creep and spy on bare victims to bask

Each to hunt each, the blood hunt commences

 

They jump to shadows and in mist transform

As preys wander naïve in their pink dreams

Then out they slip in perfect human form

And charm their dupes with intrigues of bright gleam

 

The gleam forms oceans of obscurity

With time she slips into the direful trance

He clasps her heart, virtue and chastity

Through the eloquence of cryptic romance

 

It leaves her hollowed or awful marred

And regroup with his demons pack, so proud!

Author's Note

Where I come from, we are a conservative society, based and run by religion. And our religion "Islam" Prohibit any relationship between men and women before marriage - Personally I like that. So this poem is about those guys who trick women , maybe also outside of my society, to simply use them to sate their bloody and lusty desires then throw them away after they are done.

Reviews

[KeeD]

The Title drew me in, although i'll read any of your work because honestly i'm a fan.
Your ability to tell a story through poetry and with such amazing imagery.. wow sir not to mention this piece can be perceived in a different light as well, with the metaphors so creatively thought about.

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

thank you so very much
I shall hold your testimony dearly

[Ohhhwillow]

You captured the concept of hunger, thirst and desire so accurately here, how refreshing to stumble upon a piece that is completely metaphorical! I love this. Other cultures fascinate me!

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Thank you, Willow!
I am so pleased and humbled by your words!

[Tarry Franck]

I agree with Keegan D'souza - couldn't have said it any better! Brilliant!

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

thank you again

[Tarry Franck]

my pleasure again

[vspjaguar]

A strong metaphoric poem about the animals among the human. Very well written.

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

thank you my friend

[LA Lorena]

If I were a wolf, I'd be offended by the comparison! ;)

You state your beliefs with conviction and certainty. Abuse and deception of others for personal enjoyment is wrong. Well stated!

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

LOL! indeed
thank you, LA

[Dalia]

I agree with your note and highly respect it.

You've handled that theme perfectly, and the metaphors you used were powerful and full of imagination.

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Thank you, Dalia
Glad you liked it