Sonnet XXXVI - The eyes of hope and ambition

Sonnet XXXVI - The eyes of hope and ambition

A Poem by Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

 

Today I gazed in the eyes of freedom

Swam in endless polychrome fairyland

Upon a seraphic moody kingdom

In that exquisite realm, virgin of man

 

I dared to venture in and disregard

Those eyes of hazel had a tempting trance

Although they were wounded and deeply scarred

They danced so sad in a silent romance

 

They had no limit, acknowledged no sky

Had much fears, much torments, and much sorrow

But still they dared to spring up wings and fly

Unto the cryptic land of tomorrow

 

Today at the eyes of hope I brooded

In frozen tears and sorrow I mooted

 

© 2013 Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-


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You cant fully understand this sonnet unless you imagine it :)
The couplet is too beautiful to describe.
Thanks alot Adam, looking forward to reading more of your dark poems soon

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

8 Years Ago

Thanks, Sultan :)
Holy Moly!
You have an outstanding way with words! This was soooo dark but amazing all at the same time!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Angel
s y e

8 Years Ago

Anytime darlin'
dark but so beautiful...entrancing use of rhyme, subtle, and near rhyme...

i'm brooding now.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Jacob
I am truly honored

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Tags: Love, eyes, hazel, veture, freedom, pain, suffering, trance, romance

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Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-
Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

Amman, Middle East, Jordan



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