Trapped

If some thing is worth hating � than that thing is the bloody plague of love, which devours our harts and souls,leaving us looking behind at all the misery it caused, knowing that it�s not gonna lave very soon XD

This cruel thing called love,

Has a bizarre way of choosing its victims.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

*Bet you didn’t expect this, did ya?

Reviews

[angelina neves]

powerful... and full of emotions!
although i don't agree!!! love is like a bird, beautiful and free! and comes and goes and only you can make it sore if you try o hold it in a cage... but it will not sing anymore! and you can kill it at any time...
and in a strange way, it can also be beautiful to see a bird fly away, even though we can't fly after it, we can always dream about the places it goes... :)
And most people think of love the same way as you do: they feel victims of love... As for me, i'm always prepared to jump into love as i love to be in love!!! I shine and become more beautiful and younger, and brillant when in love!! :)

[Dorchadas]

Powerful and intense... I like it ~smiles~

I too believe that love can be cruel...
but it can also elevate you above everything else

...doesnt everything in the world have it's polar opposite
without one feeling or emotion the other couldn't exist ;)

[she makes me weird]

This is an interesting piece. So short and yet very emotional. Does falling in love make someone a victim? I choose to believe differently...never the less, great write.

[Euphoric Sin]

Definitely was not expecting that!
Although I agree with my prior reviewers in that the note takes away from the poem.
Powerful words, nice work.

[huma]

terror is the beginning of wisdom...

Very nice. Big Smiles.

[Vanessa Whiteley]

A powerful short poem but I agree with Annalisa that your note undermines it.

[Annalisa]

Short, simple, and oh so true. I loved this ^^, though the note at the end in unnecessary, it undermines the poem a little. But this was amazing. I wish i could organize my thought so neatly.

[Mel Stevens]

Few words, but many emotions. Good job.