Drafting a dream...

Drafting a dream...

A Poem by Adelise Eclair
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We were only silly little kids making up promises about a fairy tale ending.....still it had an important place in my heart, if only...

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Draft of a broken dream

she sat by the stained glass window, gazing at the pouring rain
The cold wind upon her skin, as it fogs up the window pane
she then recalls a promise from a time not so long ago
when winter began its passing  and the sun melted away the snow

a promise  between 2 children, tis but a childish scheme
involving a red roofed house that sat by a flowing stream
a dream to be together when they reach that "certain" age
and to live happilly ever after, yet still turn the story's page

she then  smiles as the tears began to pour forth
if one were to ask why  she just could not retort
a childs drawing with a joy that held no cost
and dreams of long ago that will forever be lost

"it was a childish wish" she whimpers wiping away the tears
a wish that would surely be gone after all the passing years...

© 2013 Adelise Eclair


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its a pity most of the dreams we come up with as kids never come true .....but i know i enjoyed comming up with them ....i enjoyed it very much it took ne back a few years .

Posted 8 Years Ago


Adelise Eclair

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
i love it!, its well put & wonderful!! VERY well done!!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Adelise Eclair

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
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Loveless

8 Years Ago

not a problem!;)

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Adelise Eclair
Adelise Eclair

Philippines



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