diary of a lover <3

diary of a lover <3

A Poem by Asb
"

remembering my first love :)

"

love to look at that innocence

every time you look at me....


the cushy touch on my heart

and you hold my beats


my head in your hair

that heavenly feeling

in that gentle breeze...


love those days

when i lie on your lap

and you just look into me....


walk in the spring

those early days

in that lonely street

hush you said

kissed my hand

and disappeared

inside me...



holding my hands

in those nights

when you went inside me

your voice so serene

like a lovely lullaby  



forget my world

and those hurts

when you sat 

besides me



every time i was low

you fought the world

like the angel from my dreams


the trust you gave

saying my name

every night in my ears

and the prayers you prayed 

closing those eyes looking at me


i love your every single move

i love you like a 

never ending dream



two lives in one one soul

thats what we meant to be

.

.

.

.

lost in you

you lost in me

it's all i want to be

© 2012 Asb


Author's Note

Asb
for all those who have faith in love...even if their heart was broke :)
xoxoxoxo

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Love is like a never ending dream...sometimes a nightmare...but when it's good...it's like the dreams you have when you fly...you feel as if you can coast on forever in a perpetual state of bliss. Good luck on the contest.

Muse

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful and sad poem. I like the flow of the poem. Love allow us to dream then allow us to know sadness. Then teaches us to be wise and kind when the real love appeared. A sad ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love makes and breaks .. It takes us to places sweet .. and bitter sweet .. We mourn it's leaving .. Till we find it again .. Remember it is better to have loved and lost, than never to have loved at all .. ..

good write ! .. Jazz

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a beautiful and well-written poem! I was amazed when I read this, because it was all so dreamy and peaceful. Bravo!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Asb

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