Dried Up

You saw our love

As a tree

With roots

But you never cared for me

So I died of thirst

And you never knew

What to do

With a dead tree

So you left

Author's Note

Open for comment and critique. thanks for reading! ❤

Reviews

[Diane]

butter sweet. I loved it.

[Christy the Poetic Hear..]

Sad but still beautiful. Thanks for sharing this nice poem full of emotions!!!

[Correspondence]

Thanks a ton! :))

[Dave Brown]

Appreciate your review or "rain"
Would a bit of loving rain have helped those starved love roots

[Correspondence]

Very much so! :D

[Chris Shaw]

We all need a little bit of tender love and care. Without it we are empty. Nice little poem.

Chris

[Onlyme]

Heart-wrenching! Powerful and sad.

[Blobfishlover]

So depressing have you ever thought of going gay?