A Poem by Ahmed Tokyo

Simple description of my burnt soul


I am the victim of life
Everyday i'm killed with a knife
Blood comes out
But no feelings
U know why..cause i'm dead
I can live no more
Feeling that i'm sore
The smile turned into a tear
The happines into fear

My heart..i thought it was clear
But its full of shadows
Full of flames
Burning inside
Flames..long and wide
I just looked at the sky
And cried
Cause the smile always die
I thought i found the happiness
But always ruins over
Will this always be the way
Dying And crying everyday
I have no power to stay
Cuz everybody is away

I  need to end this
I need some one to be with
I need to smile
But i can't
Problems everyday
Loads everynight
Nightmares when i sleep
Sadness so deep

When is the end?
When will it start to mend
When will i find
The smile
And throw everything behind
Cause tears made me blind
So i can't see the good things

I'm just a bird with no wings
A mute person who sings
That's what is called Dethreaper

© 2011 Ahmed Tokyo

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I'm sorry for that but I Sometimes forget to write tha last letter (H)

Posted 11 Years Ago

Love the flow but the spelling errors kind of put me off. I dunno, I'm just a stickler for that stuff. Sweep through it and fix up those spelling mistakes, but all in all, great poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago

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2 Reviews
Added on September 7, 2011
Last Updated on September 7, 2011


Ahmed Tokyo
Ahmed Tokyo

Cairo, Egypt

I have to give special thanks to: My best friend who has been encouraging me through the years : Islam Mo3taz I am looking for a poem that says Everything so I don't have to write anymore. more..

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A Poem by Ahmed Tokyo