# DISTRACTION

# DISTRACTION

A Poem by anonymous_at
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it's always not necessary that the other one will love you in the same way as you do......sometimes they might feel different about you and sometimes it gets hard to accept that fact...

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You were all messed up and fucked up,
the first time I had seen you......
I saw you,
 despite being in the pool of troubles and ghosts of past
I fell for you.....
You wore blue sweatshirt everyday,
me, my life and my heart; all were black and void......
and use to take solace in the dark night!!
But yet,
everyday, in the crowd, I would search 
for the same color; my blue 
and 
even the slight sight of it would give me comfort...
Your past was hidden,
has been bright or dark .......
nobody knew...
But,
ghosts of my past, who have been 
haunting for years left me,
when they saw you 
and so,
I couldn't help but fall for you...
In return,
      all I was for you......
      was DISTRACTION........

© 2018 anonymous_at


Author's Note

anonymous_at
it's always not necessary that the other one will love you in the same way as you do......sometimes they might feel different about you and sometimes it gets hard to accept that fact... hope everyone like my work..... enjoy reading... :)

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Yes, I guess we meet people for a reason and, as someone points out here, they all cannot stay by our side forever, for some are just passengers on this journey of life. We all learn from one another on this journey. But you cannot allow yourself to be mistreated for so long and then accept it as love.
Anybody that find pleasure in your pain is not good company in your life. Get away from such toxic people who like to project their negative vibes on others.
We are all on this Earth to love one another, even through a simple smile.

WELL DONE

Posted 5 Years Ago


Sometimes we need to be someone’s distraction for both parties to learn and grow- meeting someone is never not for a reason- it’s all meant to be for a lesson or a blessing- it’s best at times that we are just a distraction as it wouldn’t have been worth anything else- life is like a River never passes over same spot twice- need to take and learn from each encounter- deep and meaningful- this too shall pass🌹

Posted 5 Years Ago


anonymous_at

5 Years Ago

In life everyone doesn't come in just to stay by our side forever
Every person nd moment is .. read more
Your life observations are quite straightforward & relatable which makes your writing interesting & compelling. I think you could stretch a little bit more in a few places, such as the opening sentiments: "messed up" and "fucked up" -- even tho realistic, as a writer it's always a good challenge to try to say ordinary things in a more original & multi-layered way. The best aspect of this story in a poem is the blue sweatshirt, as it can symbolize anything about another person that we immediately identify with & which we think of, when thinking of this person. It's good the way you did this by showing instead of telling. The other thing I really like is the ending, becuz love & everyday attractions are always lopsided & often not fair. You state this without whining -- it is what it is. I like that way of showing life to be a b***h, but not whining about it. (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


anonymous_at

5 Years Ago

Well all of my works are since my own story
So I sometimes in flow get lost in my own way of.. read more
There is a beautiful agony here, the hauntings, the ghosts of life pulling you into the darkest places of you, and the blue world of wanting. Distraction, how that thought in you is a novel by itself.

Posted 6 Years Ago


anonymous_at

5 Years Ago

Well I agree but the thing is that over here girl hasn't termed her love towards him as distraction .. read more
An owl on the moon

5 Years Ago

May it all bring you more hope, more joy, more peace in all that is to come...
Sometimes you find what you are not in need of... sometimes you’re just blessed with a good friend and really... who can’t use a few more of those :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


anonymous_at

6 Years Ago

Lmao....ok.. But even i want to enjoy my youth but when s**t happens, it doesn't give damn f**k abou.. read more
McEltic

6 Years Ago

It’s okay, trust me, at my age heard em all, used em all and even invented a few :)
anonymous_at

6 Years Ago

😂 😂😂😂 great....
Ghosts, thoughts and temptation. A wonderful poem. I liked the description and the ending. You made the reader believe your words and thoughts. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. I enjoyed this one.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


anonymous_at

6 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for taking out time to consider my poem as readable and worth your review.... :)... And.. read more
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

Life is the writer's and Poet's energy for writing. You are doing well. And you are welcome.
anonymous_at

6 Years Ago

Hmmmm..... :)

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