If tomorrow never comes....

If tomorrow never comes....

A Poem by Kaitlyn Skinner

If tomorrow never comes...
Would you miss me? 
Or would you just move on?

If we had our own place...
Would you tell your family about me?
Or would you still keep me a secret?

If I asked you to marry me...
Would you say yes?
Or would you just leave me astray?

If I had to answer these questions...
Do you know what I'd say?
Because to me there is no thinking about it.

To me there is no doubt in mind.
I know what I'd say....
I'd say baby, I love you and will you be mine?
But, the real question is...
Will your answers be the same as mine?

© 2012 Kaitlyn Skinner


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Having these questions asked are pretty difficult to answer when there is uncertainty flowing in the atmosphere.

You have a few grammatical errors like "would you tell you"r" family about me?" I understand, I read my stuff dozens of times and I continue to miss errors all the time. Try reading it out loud it works for me.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kaitlyn Skinner

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the correction. I had it correct when I first wrote it, but I guess I was in a hurry.



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Having these questions asked are pretty difficult to answer when there is uncertainty flowing in the atmosphere.

You have a few grammatical errors like "would you tell you"r" family about me?" I understand, I read my stuff dozens of times and I continue to miss errors all the time. Try reading it out loud it works for me.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kaitlyn Skinner

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the correction. I had it correct when I first wrote it, but I guess I was in a hurry.

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Kaitlyn Skinner
Kaitlyn Skinner

Decatur, GA



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My name is Kaitlyn Skinner. I am from Decatur, GA. My birthday is Oct. 29th making me a Scorpio. I graduated high school in 2011 from Druid Hills. I am currently waiting on my date to leave for Air Fo.. more..

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