Move

Just thinking about changing my destiny and continuing to be a writer, what you guys think?

Don't sit there silently,

get up and just make a move.

Do it now before your fate is decided

and you become wrapped up in a destiny that isn't yours.

 

You can decide fate,

if you decide to...

Please help yourself or you can't heal.

All you need to do is move...

Author's Note

be honest but if you don't like then don't review

Reviews

[rivers]

The journey on that long road has many crossroads...Only we decide which turn to make, whether to stay on the main road or forge new paths that may become someone else s main road when in motion. Baby steps, steps, strides, running then flying. The inertia of motion is well understood and only we hold the key...I love the positive hopeful understanding written here by Kitsune.

[Aeternal Oceanfire]

Yay! Writing again! I knew you could do it!

[Ezekiel Silver]

I like this poem. It rings a clear truth to it. (If that makes any sense at all.) And I'm sure it'll be quite inspirational both to others and to yourself. As all REAL poems are. Keep it up!!