CALM DOWN

......this is going to turn in to violence......

Falling into a plate of colors,

Swim in a pool of sensation,

Run around like there's no such thing,

As pain and sorrow and crying.

Pace across a long rainbow,

Touch the sky and fly atop a crow.

Close your eyes,

They've been opened too much to real life.

Dream away into your own world,

Discard the angry bitter souls.

Don't hide from fantasy,

Don't hide from happy.

Jump atop planets and stars,

Bring the joy where ever you are.

Forget the aching heart aches,

Jump across vanilla lakes.

Roll around in everyone's love,

Jump until you hit above.

Tie yourself in golden ribbons,

Forget sadness and just have fun.

Author's Note

Reminds me a bit of J-Hope or Chanyeol. XD Always happy!

Reviews

[Shirohana]

really good poem.. it calm me down. really..
it erase my tears...
well written n great! ^^

[Akashi]

Thanks a lot, Shirohana.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Loved the last stanza especially the last line...
"Forget sadness and just have fun"...that's my motto every minute. Lol.

Too much negative thoughts and feelings could kill...so it's better to forget anything which can cause you a chain of heartaches.

Stay calm. Forgive your enemies...forget their sins - a lesson I learned from a friend...for I believe before that I must forgive and forget the sinner and not the sin.

Nicely penned, Akashi. :)

[Akashi]

Thank you.

[Chidoriflower]

This is so magical!!!:D It brought tears to my eyes....the imagery is magnificent. Fantasy is an escape from reality; I especially liked the vanilla lakes, and the plate of colors. However, there seems to be some kind of darkness underlying. I loved this. :D Sodaina, Akashi-sama!!

[Akashi]

You know that this is the only happy poem I'm going to write, the rest is going to be negative and violent.

[Chidoriflower]

Um...ok.

[Akashi]

GOOD.

[Ency Bearis]

A good message with the last stanza, nicely penned.

[Akashi]

Thanx

[Brett Pritchard]

I liked reading this piece a lot.
It has an endearingly pure and hopeful quality.
Sometimes its good to just say what the hell.... Forget the seriousness and brutality that day to day life can fell us with, and instead just let fun reign!

Well done.

BP

[Akashi]

Thank you......

[quinfinn]

obviously hastily penned, but very, very good! this is an enjoyable astral experience of magnanimous proportions. well penned.....

[Akashi]

Thank you very much, monsieur, you are such a nice human.

[quinfinn]

quite welcome