God's Greatest Creation

No one understands you better than your mom...

She is special

Lovely and graceful

She gives a helpful hand when in need

She is great indeed 

Just think and she is already there 

With a big heart and care

She has many responsibilities and burdens

Which we can't even imagine

She gives all her time to those she loves dearly

And never complains or gets angry

She is beautiful and alive! 

She is the one 

Only one

Without whom we can't survive

She can consume all the pain

And will never have someone to blame

She hides all the pain 

Perhaps,"she would not want to appear constrained"

She is the tree that you lean upon,

She is the solution when you feel withdrawn

She is the heart that beats inside you,

Which you can't miscue

She lives with you,

She lives for you,

She feels for you,

For her loved ones she would die
Until we have children,we can't know why

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

Quite an excellent tribute to your mom.If my kids wrote this for me i would be very proud.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome:)

[Jyoti Dhawan]

This is lovely!!... I can well connect to it....keep it up!!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Powerfully endearing write!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Daisy Morgy]

aww love it! its so sweet and filled with emotion

[Akshat♥]

Thank you 😊

[Joiedevivre]

a wonderful tribute to the most special woman in everyone's lives :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you😊

[Trevor Jay Bloodworth]

Reminds me of my mom. Good work. Roused some emotions with that one haha.

[Akshat♥]

thank you :)

[Lourisa]

I like the form of this poem. The many short stanzas fit for me perfectly with stanza four:
"she has many responsibilities and burdens
Which we can't even imagine"
A very sentimental poem. It made me so sad and it shouldn't. It made me miss my mum who passed away when I was a teenager but more than that, I am a mum too and came very close to taking my own life not too long ago. But that is all over now, like you said in your poem "She lives for you" I will live for my boys. Always. Great poem Akshat.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[topsyturvy]

It's beautiful. It's rare to find someone who devotes their time to write something for their mom. I love my mom and have written quite a few, though not as beautiful as yours ;) it's simple but it's true and heartfelt.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you so much :)

[Katseye]

I wish I could be the mom you discribe, but my temper frays and I do get mad. Still I love my little monster no watter what she does.

[Akshat♥]

All mothers are best for me...all are doing their best :)
Thank you :)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

There are few who shape us more deftly and artistically than our mothers...and I think that you have brought this notion across quite nicely. The emotion here is evident and powerful. I truly "believe" what you have written, and I think that's effective. Stylistically, perhaps some tightening up of the language and length, but overall, I think the sentiment is too sweet not to notice.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)