God's Greatest Creation

God's Greatest Creation

A Poem by Akshat♥
"

No one understands you better than your mom...

"



She is special
Lovely and graceful

She gives a helpful hand when in need
She is great indeed 

Just think and she is already there 
With a big heart and care

She has many responsibilities and burdens
Which we can't even imagine

She gives all her time to those she loves dearly
And never complains or gets angry

She is beautiful and alive! 
She is the one 
Only one
Without whom we can't survive

She can consume all the pain
And will never have someone to blame

She hides all the pain 
Perhaps,"she would not want to appear constrained"

She is the tree that you lean upon,
She is the solution when you feel withdrawn

She is the heart that beats inside you,
Which you can't miscue

She lives with you,
She lives for you,
She feels for you,
For her loved ones she would die
Until we have children,we can't know why



© 2013 Akshat♥


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Akshat♥
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This is beautiful hun.. even before the changes I was in love with this poem. I do hope you will share this with your mother.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

She don't know english :P
I have to translate to her :)
Am glad that you loved this wond.. read more
a nice tribute to your mom.. loved it...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thank you dear :)
this poem is about a great person by a great person a great piece of writing

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thank you dear :)
Noone can replace mother.. this one is great tribute to your mother.. Love it bro...
Thanks for the invite :)
- Singh :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thank you dear :)
Vikrantsingh

10 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
"Mother is God in the eyes of a child" Splendid tribute to all mothers. An excellent read and write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Beautifully expressed..this poem is a tribute to every mother.
Mother, a bundle of joy
She’ll never let you cry
Her love is eternal
There’s no sound of betrayal


Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

wow...sweet lines for mother :)
Thank you :)
A great tribute to a great institution. Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thank you :)
a beautiful tribute to mother, liked it :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Prritiy

10 Years Ago

welcome :)
There is nothing more powerful than a mother's love. You've created a beautiful tribute in your poem.

She lives with you,
she lives for you,
she feels for you,
she can even die for you

These are very true words.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Very nice and touching tribute to a mother.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Akshat♥

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