Upon a full moon

poetry

Upon a full moon

A poem by Albert Freeman
 
 
There will come a time upon a full moon when we shall chance to meet
upon a moon so full will I sweep you in my arms
I will feel your tender lips against mine and inhale the heady aroma of romance
we shall walk upon a sea of roses til we meet a bed of roses
candle light from a thousand angels shall ring us as one
the very heavens above shall open and a ray of light from this heavenly moon
shall shine down to light the way
The light shall dance and leap within your green eyes sparking them as never before
our lips shall meet and be set to a tingle
as I lay with thee upon this bed of roses
my eyes shall trail up and down your body
drinking in such earthly delights
the sheer joy of my finger tips upon your body
the simple gasp of pleasure you give is as a raging inferno upon my soul
lips trailing down your perfect neck
nipping and biting and licking and teasing
to hear you moan is a joy more sweet than the gates of heaven
our bodies writhing and twisting together as one
time seeming to stand still
the air charged with our sexual frenzy
the energy dancing and leaping in the pure honesty of it all
upon this full moon all shall be revealed
and in all time we shall chance to dance
upon this perfect full moon

@2007

Author's Note

Constructive criticism is always welcome.

Reviews

[Michael X]

Albert, this is a smooth romantic relinquishing with the zeal of ecstasy, combining the
heat of passion with the throes of moonlight inhibitions, this is blissfully rendered
with many lines written to height of expression, you have captured an aspect of romance
that many can relate to, describing the heavens, fingertips tracing pleasure, the
frenzy of sensual appetites being satisfied, the whirl wind fantasy capturing the essence
of dream. the imagery is laced with spellbound shades of passion, brilliantly done, mike

[Bear]

ahhh, walking in the moonlight with a loved one amongst the aroma of roses~~ beautiful, perfectly, graciously beautiful!! Fine write, thanks for sharing!!
Bear

[Nely Amorim]

I can't wait to dance in the moonlight with you.. your poetry is sensual and sweet to my eyes... xxx