Continuous Seasons(Haiku Compilation)

1.

Butterflies flying,

So high above the blue sky;

The spring calls them home.

 

2.

As I sit alone;

Thinking about our last night,

My spirit fills up.

 

3.

Celebrating life;

I sing a song to my love,

Perpetually.

 

4.

The peace surrounds us.

Mother Nature hold us tight.

We are back to dust.

Reviews

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Wow!
Your words are a mesmerizing treat!
Thoroughly enjoyed reading it!
Kudos!

[PoeticChico]

Thanks for your review!
It's appreciated.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are welcome!

[Willard Wells]

Great work on this series, sorry I call them that for lack of a better name, but I like compilation. Well done. Suggest you drop all capitalizations and consider reducing the punctuations.

I have done many of these and in the process was schooled you might say until I did more research.

The worst thing about Haiku and Senryu is since they never match the original form and have been morphed to English language, everyone has an opinion, as I do. So in the end put a smile on your face as that is all that really matters.

[iamshadowine]

this is an amazing poem! loved it :)

[PoeticChico]

Thank you for taking the time to read it!

[Emily]

I love it!
I love the meaning of it the most!
Keep it up!

[PoeticChico]

Thank you Emily!

[Coyote Poetry]

A hopeful and beautiful poem.
"The peace surrounds us.
Mother Nature hold us tight.
We are back to dust."
Good to be blessed with Nature near. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[PoeticChico]

Thank you for taking the time to read!

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.