It's Like a Mirror.

When I see you I see me.

I've taken a moment to think. Lost in my own thoughts. 

When I look at you, you stare upon me curiously. 

I'm puzzled by your comprehension. 

When nobody is around, I think of things and a tear comes to my eye, 

and there you are putting your hand on my face, staring curiously into my eyes. 

When I smile at you, you smile back, then your on your way. 

When I lye down to rest, 

there you are sitting right beside me. Not moving one bit. 

When I am mad, or angry, there you are, clutching to my side. 

When I look into your beautiful brown eyes, I'm looking into my own. 

Then it made sense to me. 

Everything you do, is everything I did for my mother, too. 

She adored me, as I adore you. 

I adore your faithfulness to my side, and she did as well. 

Two people fell in love and created you, but it's more than that. 

I was blessed with a child born with a piece of my soul. 

Author's Note

(your opinion/comments will be much appreciated on my poem about my darling son, Alexander, 2.)

Reviews

[Criss ;)]

very peaceful if we think from our mind, it's emotional if we think from out heart
it's beautiful if we see from our eyes, it's truth if we feel it from our soul,
it's a piece if we see your this poem as a view of writer or reader,
but, it's onself a heaven if we analyse your this poem as a human....

i loved this write and moreover i loved you and love you because me too as your child and i can feel your love towards son how much you do. His's a lucky fella who's born from your eyes, born from your heart and came out and step into this world from your womb....May god live you and your son long and may god keep you always filled with all kinda happiness's.
Say, Hi, to you son to me and told him "You got an awesome and very caring mom" I don't know you'll say or not because i know we're far away from each other but, through this site i got chance to read your poems and your first poem got me.. This site needs you, needs such a writer who deserve to get an award of writer...you could be an awesome women+author = mom. If you try to publish your some books (any sort of) into a market then plz...notify mevia your mail, i'd love to read your books from my heart...because i love to read skillful writers even i know i'm not so good as such a writers or you but i know "i can be" and "i'll be"(i always start my day with these two words to keep myself always motivated by onself)

sorry, to bored you ..if you felt by my this review...lol :)anyway, have a great time and you'll be the greatest and greatest women and mom of this world indeedly...love you from my heart.
take care...!
and hey, to your son, hey..."little fella...you got your life", love you...!

have this 10000000000000000000 / 100 :)

[Alexis Smith]

this is one of my best reviews, you speak from the heart completely and I cherish that, thank you so much. And yes, my little one has been the most blessing gift in my life, I couldn't ask for a better reviewer, and I am sure you are a splendid writer. I would love to look into some of your writing. :)

[Sami Khalil]

"I've taken a moment to think. Lost in my own thoughts.

When I look at you, you stare upon me curiously.

I'm puzzled by your comprehension.

When nobody is around, I think of things and a tear comes to my eye, "
That is some good poetry ...Thank you for sharing...:)

[Alexis Smith]

No, thank you for your kind thoughts. :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[SteveB]

As a Dad this touched me. I liked all the little touches and how you brought it all together by linking the generations. Nicely done. Thank you for sharing it.

[Alexis Smith]

Thank you, I appreciate it. :)