You said you loved me

my boyfriend broke up with me: This is a new edit, i was advised to put for feeling and detail into it, I hope I did it :)

you said you loved me

you promised me things

like undying love n marriage

you made my heart sing

 

you made me feel special

but all you wanted was sex

you said if I did this or that

forever you will be blessed

 

i let you take me to bed

i let you be my first

but i was just another tramp

became just your jizz in the dirt

 

you made me do things

that made me feel dirty

you said you loved me foever

you said "you mean the world to me"

 

But you didnt mean it

the pain oh so cold

you left me for another

girl more experienced an old

 

now your with someone else

said she was better than me

you took my heart my soul

and my virginity

 

So, F**k you my Darling

I hope that you die

I let you have me completely

now all I do is cry

 

You were never worth it

you just wanted some girl

to be like a dish rag

wiping up your sweet soil

 

You hurt me Im crying

For my innocence lost

I was 13 you were 21

Was it worth all the cost

 

I hate you Ur nasty

I should have caught it much sooner

You were my Boyfriend, my molester

and me, just a bonner

 

I hate you Dave!!!!!!!!!

 

Reviews

[Ashley]

for 13 yrs old, this poem is very good. you can improve your writing by more experience. you wrote, "you promised me things" well what things are you talking about? to the reader, its a little bit confusing. so next time, add more detail into your writing.

[Jane Doe]

OH HE'LL NO WAIT TILL I COME TO TEXAS IMMA KICK HIS A*S! Hun you didnt deserve to be treated like that in fact no one not even prostitute deserve it!

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Hey you're not a tramp...you know what? It's his damn loss for leaving. And making you "do things" that made you feel dirty should have made you want to leave him...but either way I'm sorry...breakups are no fun. :c