Honesty

Where does his love end and where does it begin?

an autopsy, perhaps…

lay him out in a thousand pieces

untangle connections and examine the spaces in between

put him back together again and live in his body

ebb and flow with the cycle of his breath

fill his big boots

and unwind the logic of a his mind

 

enter the sphere where words carry no weight, have no impact

to find honesty unprotected, living somewhere in the confines of his flesh

Reviews

[Neon]

"Where does his love end and where does it begin?" An incredible starting with the line .. I loved the flow and the deep thoughts about the 'Honesty'... Making some love the truth, honesty and the peace everything matter.. truth's what the brings two souls more closer to each other, honesty's what that make them landed on each other.. but the peace's what that keeps that love into the heart without pain the body and heart ... Very nice flow of ink. Keep on, your cool.

[Alina]

thank you!

[Daniel Malone]

This is a situation anyone who has loved has been a part of. The motives may change. Maybe we are searching their inner workings for confirmation. "How can I know his/her love is true?" Maybe the love is so powerful that we quest for empathy. "I want to know you inside and out." Whatever your motives are, they have produced a very intriguing read!

[Alina]

Thank you

[Sir Joseph]

Very nice write! different but very nice! Good job:)

[Alina]

Thank you

[Holly Mason]

this is interesting to read-
really trying to figure some one out-love the emotional autopsy you do
creative truly
thank you for sharing

[Alina]

Thank you

[Eagle Cruagh]

Cute observation in "how to find honesty
in a cadaver".
i can see you cutting him up and that may be
the only solution to where he keeps his honesty.
Thank you
----- Eagle Cruagh

[Alina]

Thank you