I Smile

I Smile

A Poem by amandamercer`xo

I smile because you once were mine,

We were as happy as could ever be.

I smile because you made me shine,

Being together filled my heart with glee.

 

I smile because we had our time,

We were perfect, that's all that counts.

I smile because it was worth every dime.

Your love filled my body with every ounce.

 

I smile because our memories won't fade,

I'll hold onto them for as long as I live.

I smile because for each other, we were made,

But it was our time, and to time we give.

© 2010 amandamercer`xo


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

i loved your poem, it was really beautiful! and how you kept stating the 'I Smile' part, it really adds emphasis to the poem and gives it more emotion. well done!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 14 Years Ago


hey ... loved the lines:
Your love filled my body with every ounce.
But it was our time, and to time, we give.

Beautiful & heart felt ... Kudos

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 14 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

140 Views
2 Reviews
Added on November 14, 2009
Last Updated on July 19, 2010
Previous Versions

Author

amandamercer`xo
amandamercer`xo

Ontario, Canada



About
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - i'm amanda mercer i'm fifteen years old i love writing, obviously i want to be a photographer i'd love to travel.. more..

Writing
One One

A Chapter by amandamercer`xo


Two Two

A Chapter by amandamercer`xo


Three Three

A Chapter by amandamercer`xo