Love Letter

Being without him is causing me pain.

From this, there's nothing that I could gain.

I swear, I've absolutely had enough,

Though telling him this could be very tough.

He really doesn't know how I feel about him,

So the flame between us is extremely dim.

I've tried to tell him the way I feel,

But I'm just going backwards on a spinning wheel.

There's no way to make him understand,

How I've worked him into my life plan.

We really are perfect together, you see.

There's just some things he doesn't know about me.

About this boy, though, I know all,

Except whether or not he's willing to fall.

I think it's cute; when he talks, he mumbles.

I guess that's the way the cookie crumbles.

Looks like I'm just way too into this guy,

And so all my thoughts continue to fly.

Being with him would complete my life.

Maybe, someday, he'd make me his wife!

Okay, now I'm thinking too far ahead.

'Guess I should stay in the present, instead.

Figuring out a way to make him mine,

Would hopefully stop my expanding waistline.

Being with him would make it all better,

Now this is the end of my little love letter.

Reviews

[Isericanormal]

I really really like this. Super Cute! :]]

[deeps]

This is very well written here,
Very cute too, enjoyable read
Like the part about the cookie crumbles's
You are very talented for your age.

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Its very well written, cute, with personality, and a good read. I enjoyed it very much!