New Love

You're the light in the dark,

You show me the way.

You kiss me in the park,

And my knees begin to sway.

I'm living in a fantasy,

And in it, you're the one.

It's only you, can't you see?

I'm about to come undone.

You keep my pulse beating,

You're a whole new world to me.

It was no coincidence, us meeting.

It's obvious we were meant to be.

So I dream about you every night,

And pray that things will turn out right.

Reviews

[Just Charles]

Seems like the beginnings of a song...

[J.S. Pua]

i kind of enjoyed this..
a piece that many can relate to..
good work..

[Antonio Valentino]

Very beautiful and sincere.

Really enjoyed this, I know of this feeling too well!
Antonio xx