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Time.

Time.

A Poem by Aly
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Time can heal wounds,
But not mine.
Time can be healthy,
But not for me.
Time can be comforting,
But not comfortable.
Time can seem welcoming,
But in the end, it is just a persistent pest.

© 2009 Aly


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Isn't that the truth!
I like this well said.
I love the ending

"But in the end, it is just a persistent pest."

Like this it's wonderful.

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is good!!!! The last line..awesome ending! I know what you mean, but in the end time dos heal, but waiting for it to work is a pest as you say.This is short but right to the point. I like all of it, ther's no criticism from me anyway!!!! Well done, i am so adding this to my faves x

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 11, 2009
Last Updated on January 19, 2009

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Aly
Aly

Brisbane, Australia



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Im Aly. Im awesome. Im in grade eight. I love my friends ♥ Jacula Jordan ♥ 6 Months ♥ Im gonna miss everybody from primary so much :( I love you guys ♥ Kthx.. more..

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A Poem by Aly