The Energy of Consciousness

The Energy of Consciousness

A Poem by A.marie.speaks

the universe knows no difference
between you and I 
life sparks us all into this tick tock world
wind up dolls 
click clanking around
 unknowingly 
we carry this most precious gift inside
the energy of consciousness
glows bright
right out of each cell 
please do not tell me you truly believe
the creator of worlds 
bestowed motion with
empty promises - hoping
each life might prove itself worthy 
of a gift 
We've Already Received

© 2017 A.marie.speaks


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this spoke to me, and you've inspired me.

poets like you are very special, keep up the good work

also I'm new on here, so it would be an honour if you could review my poems!

Posted 6 Years Ago


A.marie.speaks

6 Years Ago

I'm humbled by your comment. If I've inspired you then I have completed my mission. Thank you!
Some lovely alliteration, flow, and phonetic mid-sentence rhyming. And then the kicker with deliberate in your face capitals. Actually that last line reminded me of Donne's last line 'It tolls for thee'; sort of sit up you idiots and think!

As always, very nice work.
Nigel

Posted 6 Years Ago


A.marie.speaks

6 Years Ago

Many thanks, friend! Humbled by your praise, as usual. Love that the last lines come off like that.... read more

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