Bitter sweet Lover

Bitter sweet Lover

A Poem by Mina
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This poem is about a woman who suffers erotomania(a type of delusion in which the person believes that another person usually a stranger, higher rank person is in love with him or her)

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a lone with an unproclaimed some one,
I called him a wise charmer,
He called me a bitter sweet lover,
half tamed he clutches ,

Skeptical young man,
Never distanced always near,
I brewed his futile captive heart,
with a key so rare,

So sleek I still paint him,
While he worships my blare,
So still he stands,
Ready to succumb my stare,

© 2013 Mina


Author's Note

Mina
Open interpretation I have already added the synopsis...
Give your views on the last stanza
What do you think happened with him ?

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This is quite lovely.
Enjoyed reading.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Mina

8 Years Ago

Thank You I have been busy with school sorry for late reply :)
zainul

8 Years Ago

You are most welcome.
I am glad that you attended school properly.
hmmm.. is she a siren? since their songs can often blare.. Honestly I am stumped as to what she is and what has happened to him at the end.. turned to stone? wrapped in a cocoon? is she a black widow spider? Anyway.. good poem without knowing all those details.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Mina

8 Years Ago

Thank You I have been busy with school sorry for late reply :)
read description you will get t.. read more
interesting poem, I loved the story you told here, especially loved the first stanza.
Great write :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Mina

8 Years Ago

Thank yu x im glad you liked and reviewed :)
annabellee

8 Years Ago

you're most welcome :)
really good poem;)))
Well done;)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Mina

8 Years Ago

Thank yu so much
Thanks for reviewing :)
I love this, so beautifully writ :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Mina

8 Years Ago

Oh thank you lovee :)
I'm glad you visited and liked :)
Aha! The narrator is the Medusa and he has turned the young man to stone!... Of course, there is no mention of the characteristics of a Medusa, but that's all I can think about. Am I close?

BTW, this is an intriguing poem with skill and wit. Love it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Karen

8 Years Ago

LOL... I guess I should have read the blurb first about eromatania. But I'm glad you still find my .. read more
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Wow. What a nice poem on a unique condition of erotomania. Splendid...:_

Posted 8 Years Ago


Mina

8 Years Ago

Thank youu im glad you visited
But no one has answered my question:P
What happens with.. read more
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

^^~^^ :)................
Ready to succumb my stare
nice written
i really like it

Posted 8 Years Ago


Mina

8 Years Ago

Thank yuu im glad you likef itt :)
Mina

8 Years Ago

What do you think happens with him in the last stanza?
"Skeptical young man,
Never distanced always near,
I brewed his futile captive heart,
with a key so rare,"
You taught me a new word and I like the story in the poem. The above lines were amazing. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 8 Years Ago


Mina

8 Years Ago

Thank you soo much
Your reviews mean a lot :)
Youre a great poet your self so this cmi.. read more
So still he stands,
Ready to succumb my stare,

I really like this line. Nice write and clever idea.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Mina

8 Years Ago

Thank You glad you liked it x

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