Cognition

In the hymns of dark night and moonlit sky
my thoughts wander around you.
The love imperfect, friendly and subtly lustful.
The pain of missing you compensated by the coarse incomplete love we carry.
And letting it be..

Reviews

[Franky]

This sounds sad and emotionally frustrating! Perfect! Well done!

[James]

Wow this left me such a lonesome feeling. Tragic, really.

[Shweta]

Thank u for reading

[Inda]

This is a great piece! and the last line is like a punch to the gut. short but powerful.

[Shweta]

Thank u Inda....thought editing wud ruin it so posted the draft itself

[tim.reed]

The language is beautifully haunting. The poem emotes almost tangible feelings. Very nice.

[Shweta]

Thank u so much...it's encouraging